Wow Great job, everything seemed very in character and the story line was great. I loved how you used the song in the story, again great job really.

Well...Pretty good but from how the first chapter went with the blondes and everything i thought that it was gonna have more Calliegh into it. Would've made it better!

Awesome ending. Loved it. :)

Wow. Nice, really nice. I can picture this capture scene in my mind. Good job.

"H's got a plan."

Honestly, I love that line. It's seems as a such a perfect ending for that chapter. Great job, you're an awesome writer.

Okay. You still have me very interested in this episode type of story. It's like I'm watching this on televison, lol. Good job so far.

Hmm...a very intriguing start. You got my attention with this story. Wonder how it will develop...

Oh, you did a wonderful job with this story. I remember you told me how hard you worked and I think it shows in the story. I know it was an episode fic, but you were able to tie in all the characters without making it seem confusing.

The ending was perfect as well. Bravo!

Ooh! The plot thickens... again, very well written. Great job!

Very intriguing so far... I think you nailed Alexx perfectly: "Baby, people doing this to others, it's not just sad – it's downright wrong."

Keep up the good work.

The N/R scene was terrible adorable. I really loved it. E/C all I'm saying is LOL! and the last part between F/H, so them I swear.

I really really enjoyed this fic! And I love reading your works when I can! You're an awesome writer! Great job!

That Lance dude is creepy as hell. Glad you got him captured and Susan's free! Go you!

Aw poor Natalia. I can sympathize with her. I mean from what we understand with her relationship with Nick in the past...I guess this case brought up unwanted memories.

And I have to say I love that line: "H's got a plan." Made me go squee!

That's who the other victim was and she was married to that guy? Dude! I'm loving this, can't wait to see how it ends!

Lol, the gut feeling scene was cute. I can picture them talking like that. And that Adams dude, whoa creepy much? Good as always!