 Darje 1/23/05 . chapter 4that was clever with the mecha codenames translated into actual names and i enjoyed the enitre trilogy and really like the fact that Shinobu found someone else...
_ |
 Kana Himezaki 11/13/01 . chapter 1FINALLY! Shinobu has someone to love! Great fanfic, the TR guys seem a bit out of pplace though. It would be much more readable without them. |
 TheArchimage 9/25/01 . chapter 4Do you know what the term "deus ex machina" means? The TR guys fit that category nicely, and I would much prefer it if they weren't there. Other than that minor note, this is well written, and it was a very enjoyable read! |
 WashuChan Ashlea Morin 7/11/01 . chapter 4 Hi! Your fic was great! I totally loved it! So far out of all the ones I have read yours was the best. Shinsei was a good character to put with Shinobu. I am glad she had someone to love. well, I gtg. Great story really! I was a bit sad when the end came though. Ja naa! |