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Reviews For: Truly as Beautiful as I Believe

rubydoo
2007-04-03
ch 2, anon.
abusehey please add more this is so good, please keep it going.
rubydoo
2007-03-22
ch 2, anon.
abusehey this is pretty good please dont stop there. finish the story please. i beg you. and i thank you.
rubydoo
2007-03-02
ch 2, anon.
abusehey please keep going this is not bad i am to much into it now.
please,please,please. and i thank you
rubydoo
2007-02-08
ch 2, anon.
abusehey not bad keep going. i am new at reading 21 jumpstreet fanfiction,just didn't think that this show could be used for fanfiction.i am gladd that i was wrong, please continue to write. thank you
tomzgrl
2006-12-11
ch 2, anon.
abuseawesome story plz write more
j.j. ryan
2006-11-20
ch 2,
abuseGreat start. Don't see much in the way of 21 JS fic. I can't believe it's been so long since this program was on. I'm showing my age because Fox was a brand new network and this was one of its first shows, LOL. Wish it could have gone on longer.
goodnightmysweetprince
2006-11-19
ch 2,
abuseso far so good!
i love the last line...very vivid and flows nicely :D
ur doing really well, if i were to criticise then my only tip would be to try longer chapters. keep writing ;D
x
goodnightmysweetprince
2006-11-18
ch 1,
abuseomg love it!! its good quality, realistic penson slash, n its hard to beat that!! perhaps you should try ur at an on-going story, much as I love oneshots, it would be interesting to see how you get on at that :D
keep writing :PXD:D
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