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| rubydoo 2007-04-03 ch 2, anon. | abusehey please add more this is so good, please keep it going. |
| rubydoo 2007-03-22 ch 2, anon. | abusehey this is pretty good please dont stop there. finish the story please. i beg you. and i thank you. |
| rubydoo 2007-03-02 ch 2, anon. | abusehey please keep going this is not bad i am to much into it now. please,please,please. and i thank you |
| rubydoo 2007-02-08 ch 2, anon. | abusehey not bad keep going. i am new at reading 21 jumpstreet fanfiction,just didn't think that this show could be used for fanfiction.i am gladd that i was wrong, please continue to write. thank you |
| tomzgrl 2006-12-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseawesome story plz write more |
| j.j. ryan 2006-11-20 ch 2, | abuseGreat start. Don't see much in the way of 21 JS fic. I can't believe it's been so long since this program was on. I'm showing my age because Fox was a brand new network and this was one of its first shows, LOL. Wish it could have gone on longer. |
| goodnightmysweetprince 2006-11-19 ch 2, | abuseso far so good! i love the last line...very vivid and flows nicely :D ur doing really well, if i were to criticise then my only tip would be to try longer chapters. keep writing ;D x |
| goodnightmysweetprince 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseomg love it!! its good quality, realistic penson slash, n its hard to beat that!! perhaps you should try ur at an on-going story, much as I love oneshots, it would be interesting to see how you get on at that :D keep writing :PXD:D |