Wow. That was a PERFECT break up scene. :D I started crying. If you can make me cry at 5:00 in the morning, you've got skills. Excellent. I truly hope to see more work from you with Alanna and Jon!

:( so sad...

man! why do you always make me cry!? IS IT SOME KIND OF GAME? MAKE LEANA CRY? WELL IT WORKED! -sob- now go make another. now.

Very emotional. And the lyrics fit perfectly. You made Jon sound like the hurt one though...which I don't like so much, but that's just a matter of opinion. Well written.

this is the reason I hated 'the woman who rides like a man' cuze of that fight, that ruined the whole books for me. stupid Alanna why, oh why didn't she say yes!?!
you write good though
-elisa

;.;

READ FEST 07!

Sorreh :p

Oh no! That was very volatile! I can understand why you'd enjoy writing it. The lyrics are really fitting, causing little shivers down my spine at such accuracy. I like this take on the fight, mainly to commend you on such a great characterisation of Jon in a small amount of space. More!

T_T *tear tear* Awesome job. The scene fits perfectly with that song...but why does it have to be so sad!?!?! *huggles Jon* Oh well...more Jon for me now! lol xDD

very very emotional (tear)
greal song combo!

Aww that's so sad! very nicely written.

What? No you coming over the sandune to take Jonathan's heart now that Alanna broke it? Or no your perfect person? That was good. . . but. . . bizzaire. You do realize you just bashed Jon. And you HATE Jon bashers. Okay. . . Well, good job. *gives thumbs up* I must say that was wierd though? My friend--who read it too--would like to know if you took my suggestion and got a boyfriend who ISN'T fictional. ^_^

That is so sad im like crying. I feel depressed now .
I always hated that scene it made me so sad and angry .I always skip it .
But I liked yours it was more … well I duno I dont have the word for it but it was written really really well !

well done .

.:Lioness of tortall:.

Hey! Sorry I haven't been on in while...this story was good. Though I do miss you Eliena story...it's probably one of my favs.
I hear you got thrown...ready for the rant? Okk...ARE YOU OK? HOW DID YOU DO THAT? WHAT WERE YOU DOING? WHAT THE HECK'S A GROWTH PLATE OR WHATEVER YOU CALLED IT? And again...ARE YOU ALRIGHT?
Ok, I'm done with my tangent...I hope you're alright.
And if you still need ideas for the Eliena story and I can think of any, I'll let ya know.
~*~Wildmage Lioness of Conte~*~
PS: Once again, I'm to lazy to sign in..
~Kristen

this made me feel the same way as when i read it in the book, although i think that this version is better because neither of them resorted to being (as) petty and childish as in the book which i think is an improvement. it was good writing although i have no clue what song that is but it totally suited the situation

WAH thats so sadd.. This fic made me cry... omg oh so sad.. but oh so brilliant piece of writing.. I absolutlely loved it.. and that song!! one of my faves... Awesome Job!
Caiti