*sighs*

i really don't know what to say... write... whatever. i spent the last three days reading your story... and not like i usually read - no. i read it carefully with wide eyes and a racing heart. i dreamed about the story at night and woke up thinking about it. your words are candy for my eyes and ears. gimme some more? even at work while i did my fucking job i hate with passion... i were thinking about your story and it made me smile . my coworkers were kinda surprised - huh. the mopy ghost can actually smile *lol*

so, this sounds so fuckin cheesy and usually i'm one of the most sarcastic persons you'll ever meet and my sister always calls me an emotionless bastard because i won't cry at movies or sad stories or at all... actually i don't think i've written anything like this shitty review...

but - i mean it. anyway.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! it's been a while since i've read a really good riku sora fic and i'm glad i stumbled upon this one. i wish i could keep redading but i'm soo tired but i'll finish asap
btw i'll be is by edwin McCain not the goo goo dolls, but i do love the song and thought it was perfect for that part. though Iris by the goo goo dolls would have fit amazingly as well (this story made me have to listen to both songs) Love your writing keep at it!

I only have one question. What happened to Sora's dog? The worry for the dog was a point that you touched on when Sora moved in with Leon, but I'm surprised that Sora didn't bother to think about his dog, even if it has been a few months. As someone who's had pets, you don't just forget them and there's always a niggling thought in the back of your mind when you're not with them as to how they're doing, if they're being taken care of, if they need you at all... So, yeah, I love this chapter a lot, and I'm a bit mystified as to Sora's mother's disappearance, but I'm mostly feeling confused and a bit disappointed that the fate of the dog wasn't mentioned at all.

I would sign in but I've got to do this quick ... so don't think I'm not signed in because I'm scared you might reply (Y)
But basically, what I wanted to say was, do you wanna put anymore of Twilight into this?

So is Riku,Axel and Sephy demons?
And are Sora and roxas angles?
This is great!

OMG! i completley and utterly love this fic. It is so awesome I couldnt stop reading it. I have two favourite chapters which are: Falling And(AS,AS)Flaming Arrows!. They were Brilliant. I love the way you have structured it and kept every little bit of detail in act. I love both Prologues so yeah. You've made me love all of the characters so much more and Most of it made me cry! You have truley inspird me and My best friend to write our own and i cant wait for Part Three.
Okay i belive i've babbled for long enough so...
GREAT STORY!

Aww Wow! I Loved Solitude But This Was Jus Amazing x33 I Love Your Writing Style =] I Think My Fav Chapter Is ' I Must Be Dreaming'? The One At The Club ;] I Loved How You Left All The Mystery's To The End To Be Discovered, Towards The End Of This Fantastic Fanfiction I Started To Cry At The Departure, It Really Touched Me =] You Really Inspired Me, With Solitude Too, To Write My Own But I Know That My English Is Simply Terrible =D You Actually Made Me A Much Bigger Fan Of Roxas Now Than I Was Before. Him + Axel Are So Adorable Too ;D And You Got The Axel Perfect! His Character Is Spot On! XD
I Got Really Upset At The Child Abuse And The SI, So That Must Mean That You Got The Effect You Planned. Oh And I Am A Big Fan Of YAOI, You Made Me Jump Up And Down In My Seat On The 'Lemon And Lime' Bit HAHA XD !
So Kolie You Did An Amazing Job On This And I Can't Wait To Read Part Two !!
xMizkhx

oh my god. This fic was so good, I couldn't stop reading it. I absolutely love how you characterized everybody, and how you weaved the past in with the present. I just... wow. I'm definitely going to start reading the sequel right after I post this. You're an awesome writer. I really admire you for sticking with this fic. =]

Kawai,

Ohkay.
-loves you now-

I LOVE THIS
so glad they've reunited at last. xD

Ohh.. Yum.. Vampuric riku... Tasttyy...

:Big cheeky disney-tastic smile:

C:


OOHMAIGOD i love this thing. xD

OOH yayzie!
I like where this is going. xD

Wh-h-h-h-how, I have no idea what is going on..
Well, I know what's going on, but not nessicarily what they're all talking about.. I mean.. What's really going on?
o.o


Good story though!

yay! they finnally talked(made-out) hehehe^^ welp sorry for making this one short but I have to go paint my shoes so yup yup yup can't wait for the next chapter I'm so glad I started reading this it's really good^^