w8... i thought katara was tan n zuko was pale... not the other way around...

wow

You're one of the best writers on here, I'm not even kidding you. And normally I don't enjoy Zucest or anything of the like, but this is so extremely well written that I must urge you to continue!

This isn't over... is it? Oh i love this story so much.

After all, he says, light has no color at all. It is warm and invisible, much like the threads of life and the heat of fire.

what a beautiful line.

This is just perfect.

This is the most unusual take on the Avatar world that I've ever encountered, and probably the most fascinating. I really enjoyed seeing how you let all of the characters grow in different directions and yet somehow have very familiar interactions. I don't know whether you intend to continue this, but I'll be reading it if you do.

wow...thats really depressing...but i like it...it makes me sad...i can't wait untill you update again!!

And I and Zuko are soul mates, but he loves his sister while I love him. I am both the luckiest and the most cursed.

you kill me!

:huggles:

and the ending about blindness and the shadow, oh..

Wow, this is so deep! I love it!!

Lovely

Very impressive. I love your style, it's so different! I also like the love triangle between Zuko, Azula, and Katara.

Really nice story I look forward to reading more.

I cried. I got through two chapter before I couldn't help myself. This is so good. Please post again soon!

Once more, my heart does a nose-dive when I see this updated, and even though it was short, It will suffice until hopefully, you're next QUICK :wink wink: update. Hehe.

I like the scar mention, how self-concious he must be, how cruel his father was, how...everything, I really do love this story.

Please don't lose your motivation please continue to update and know that I love it and YOU for making it ^.^

and I love Kataara, so understanding of, well, everything.

OH poor Zuko and Iroh! ah! Your story...

okay hoenstly need I say more?

you know I am absolutely inticed and obsessed with this.

i think i mentioned it before, but i love your title, so freaking much, it stands out from all my updated stories...de ja vu, or not, I think i wrote this before

oui i just everything about this.

update.