aww i really liked this :)

i liked the whole structure of it, allowing so many characters to have there say and the way you maintained a balanced pace of detail and insight :)

i liked the ending too x

Good job on this story.

Ah...I'm such a fangirl. I love all your Kai/Miguel fics. Please keep writing them. They're really good.

aww, that was so sad-fantastic-fucking-awesome!

I was like listening to 'who knew' by Pink all the time i read this fic and i was like crying as hell!

It cried out my heart when i read Max's POV, but when i saw Tyson's, i wanted to punch the damn screen! _ Hiro's as well!

Liked it!

I love this. The incident then all the different points of view on it. Its really well done. Keep writing :P

hi! i think this is my second favorite story that you made so far! i'm back from school anyway. there was a girl-fight at my school the other day but i don't how it started though but it was during nutrition time. alot of kids went to see it too. it's only natural anyway since we had alot of fights there last year so i really didn't care, i just stayed where i was talking to my anime and yoai loving friends. there's only a few since the rest of them were eigth graders and they graduated so it's alittle weird not having them around anymore.

i'm still making stories so i'll make sure that i make a Kai/Miguel pairing for you!

But guess what happened the other weekend? My dog is a teacup-dollface pomeranian(if that's how it's spelled) and he was having a slight flea attack so my mom and i went to a grocery store to get some flea medicine. If you have a dog or a cat then here's my warning for you and anyone else who has a pet, DON'T USE ANY HARTZ PET PRODUCTS ON YOUR PETS! And i'm serious too! Because that stuff made half of poor dog's fur fall out! And he was born with a birth mark that looks like a gash on it and it got irritated! So we took him to the groomers and we had to get him shaved down alittle bit. Now he looks like a cancer-victum!

that's all i have to say so make sure you message me again!

SEE YOU LATER!

i love this story! i can't remember if i posted a comment for this story! *ponders* anyways i think that you should make a sequal for this story! okay, i think that all of your stories need sequels! they're just that great! :) even the sequel's need sequels! anyways great job!

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i liked it poor tyson

even though it is tyson's fult but he is not to be blamed

poor tyson

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