Oh my goodness... Incredible. This is so beautiful and sweet... Short and sweet, but fantastic

Nice one

WAI! can u put mah charrie in da nex chappie? this is the best chapter yet! UR GONNA WRITE MORE RITE? thx for r&ring mah story -.o0 me 0o.

I like it. It's terse, and very interesting. I would say update soon, but since this is a oneshot, that would be stupid.

Chicaga