Hi,

First i'm sorry but even if i can read and understand english, i still have difficulties to write it well.

So, i have read this story because i coudn't wait for the traduction of Sirius Chan. It's marvelous ! I love so Kei...

I wanted to congratulate you for describing so intensely and with so much reaslim the emotions of Kei and Cho and the others... I wish i would be so talented...

Well, i think i'd rather stop here to massacre your language.
I just hope you'll continue to write full of stories about Kei et Cho!!

Kiss

Hyoga

This is such a beautiful, sad story as well being well-written and a nice strong plot. I think you've really cleverly portrayed the emotions of each character without straying and...just wow.


One of my Moon Child favourites :) I really do hope that you will write more.

Gah!! I dont like those snooping police men. Sheesh. They should be focusing on Taku not Kei and Sho who kill the bad pplz

This is so sad!! Everyone seems to hate Kei right now. Gah. I hope things get sorted out and stuff.

Oh no! This is so sad! Sho can't hate kei forever I hope.

WOW again. I love it, love it love it love it. I am so amazed by your writing abilities, this sequel was just as good as the first story! I loved the ending, I really really did. It was wonderful to see that Kei and Sho may finally get the chance at happiness with each other, and for that I am so glad.
A follow on would be amazing. ^.^ I'll be on the lookout!

Another instant classic TuT
I loved the prequel to thios one, I love this one... please DO please consider making a sequel... please WRITE a sequel.

Congrats. (I still gotta read the rest of your fics, btw)

Holy...there's too little moon child fanfics here...dang..I actually finished this story, and I love it. Didn't expect to see such a long and complete yet so well written story here. Its amazing!


Luved it!

I enjoyed this story VERY much! Well done! You are an extremely talented writer, and I'm very much inspired by you. I'm going to try to think of a Moon Child fic myself now ^^.
I liked the ending. It was sad, but it had to be for what had happened. I was really moved by this entire story to this final chapter!
Great job, and I can't wait for more fics from you! Especially for another Moon Child one ^__^ Thank you!
FireHead

Perfect! Great! I'm so happy XD

Thanks again for writing this

MY GOD THERE WAS A SEQUEL? OH MY! I can't believe it! so the dream is not over XD ahahah ok now i'm going to read ^^

it'S... finished? *cry*
what a great story omg how i like it... but poor tashiro... to be alone like this must be so hard... maybe a sequel?? XD hey let me dream lol

it's actually over? that's horrible...i guess i won't have this to look forward to anymore. that's kinda sad. but...i do have your other stuff to look forward to, so you have to update them...::grins:: i did like the ending. and a follow up would be great, but i don't know if it's necesary. but i wouldn't mind seeing them come back to mallepa. i like knowing that tashiro's still around, and i would love to know what happens to him, another reason for a follow up. i loved it...and can't wait for more of anything else you've got for us...
hugs...empath

Brilliant ending. It's the kind that makes you want to scream and shout for more, for something! but... you end it all in such a way that to draw it out wouldn't do anything, and everything is wrapped up anyways.
The only thing that I can think of left unresolved is what becomes of Toshi... And even that is not a matter of unfinished work, but a mourning at the sad conclusion you do provide. '"Okay." He nodded, knowing better than to say anything more.' Even if you do bring him up later, he's not there, and I don't truly believe he ever would be again. Sho's become too jaded to be try and hold on to his old life.
Shinji died. But, it was the set up for a splendid scene, and a splendid ending, so I'm not too disappointed. I'm glad that he was able to forgive Sho, in the end. Though, somehow, I think it would have been less sorrowful if he couldn't. Not completely sure why - something like he could never forgive them for taking his brother away... But if he was able to completely disown Sho, as he had stated before, well, it's easier to forgive strangers, isn't it? But that's just me, being insane...
Sho did turn Tashiro. Were you plotting that, or did you decide to do it after you killed him off? It doesn't matter, just curious. Their conversation is one of the best parts of the chapter, I think. I don't know how to put into words why I like it. It's just... symbolic, and sweet, and oh-so sad... Love it!
The ending is perfect. I said that at the start - but I didn't give myself a chance to talk it out in my head (that's what my reviews mostly are, i've noticed. just me examining the chapter - I do hope it isn't tedious to read...) Ending! Right... Everything is wrapped up. Everyone is dead or abandoned or gone. And they leave Mallepa. The symbolism of that, leaving the cursed city where they've lived for so long... A complete renewal. They leave that dark city - dark, which is so often associated with sadness... for a place on the beach, bright and sunny, as full of misery as it is to Kei. With nothing behind them, and nothing ahead. And that is a perfect ending.
I don't think that they would ever return to Mallepa. And some day, when everything was said and done a hundred times over, they'd walk outside, and lay on the beach until sunrise. That being said, if you wanted to write a sequel, I'd suggest you move them back, (or at least being Toshi and Son (and maybe Tashiro) out!) as that would make things more interesting. But, honestly, I think I'd leave it be. It's perfect the way it is. And while I have no doubts at your brilliance as a writer, I think I'd enjoy seeing it remain as it is. Your choice, though. You're the author (and such a brilliant one at that...)
I'll keep an eye out, for whatever you decide to work on!
~Linker27

so so so so...
I beg you to continue...

I can't wait it any longer, please