you have GOTTA update! this is such a wonderful story! i love it ^_^ i hope that seifer's gonna be ok... oh poor zell! T^T

ya gonna update anytime soon?

Hm.. it must've been long ago that I first read your story. If you see the statistics on new manga, game, or anime titles, you'll probably see that, besides Naruto and Bleach, there aren't many that make it like these old titles. Maybe it's just me but many internet users seem to enjoy buzzing around fb or twitter more than reading fanfictions these days.
But anyway don't stop updating this one story, but not just for the sake of updating. :( I love it!

A great story realy, i started it two days ago and culdnt stop myself from reading it till the end
Im following it so i hope to continue whit it soon :)

Pff, nothing to feel embarrased about! It's the author's own decision when and if they want to write or update. :) And the chapter was awesome like always. I think you're too hard on yourself.

I love these suspenseful chapters, superb job done once again I say. It really got me wondering if Seifer'll be okay... that was quite a bite he got! I'm gonna feel so bad for Zell when he gets told the news. He's so excited too, as he's thinking they're all just coming home. (Mental note: buy some tissues before starting to read the next chapter)

I also find myself now wondering, what was Hajeq and his goons doing there in the first place? Hmm. Guess I got a little distracted by Seifer's condition and all first. :D

Anyway, I'm glad you decided to update, but don't take it as if I demanded a follow-up right away. Take all the time in the world you possibly need and don't stress yourself up too bad, I'm sure everyone interested can take the wait. :) And happy umm...September! There's nothing happy about September though, as that is when my school started, but for the sake of bestowing a thought... :D

The chapter is really great. I hope Seifer is alright.

Yay! I am so glad you have updated again! :-)

Poor Seifer, though...I do hope he's all right. Zell is strong, though and there is nothing wrong with this fetus, so I think he'll be fine...in fact, considering how bored he is, I think he will thrive taking care of Seifer during his convalescence! (And he's the one person Seifer can't snap at when he's grumpy...hello, pregnant! :P ;-)

Oh poor Seify! :o
That mean Commander, he's such a knob! Threatening to kill Seifer. *spits at him*

I like the chapter a lot, I can't wait to read the next one, I hope Seifer's ok and Zell doesn't panic too much!

Keep it up :)

I just read through this story, and although I'm not too, how shall we say, keen, on mpregs, I think you've done this story fantastically well.

I am really getting into it and I feel like I'm there with the characters. I can imagine Selphie wanting to throw baby showers!

I really like this "nice-guy" that Seifer is becoming, I like a sweet Seifer (but not all the time...down boy!)

I know you haven't updated since November, but maybe you could, as I'd really like to see this story continue and for the baby to be born, and also to see what happens at that time, with Zell and/or the baby, if they survive etc. And if anything happens, how Zell/Seifer cope(s) with it.

Anyway that was a big ramble, but all in all I really like the story and I can't wait for the next installment! ^.^

Are you not continuing this story?
That makes me really sad!
I've fallen in love with it!
Please find it in your heart to finish it! I'll send you imaginary cookies!

omg omg omg please update please i love ur story its one of the best i've read yet. i love seiferxzell

I really love it so far!! I hope everyone comes back alright.

This is soo cute~ And so dramatic but a really good story :3 Upload soon, okay!! Pretty Please...?

I don't typically read Mpreg fics, but this one amuses me. Mostly because I think it would make the most incredible episode of 'Maury'.

"When it comes to Zell Dincht's unborn child, Seifer, you ARE the father!"

*cheering crowd, Zell dancing and shouting "told you so!" and so on...*

I apologize. I am quite tired and this fic makes me smile.

Critic

update please please please i am so pumped about this story that i read it twice to pass the time until the next update
i want to see seifer and zell fluff. plus the baby i just cant wait. personaly i like the whole
"i think my water just broke." scene.