A great story. Very good.

Oh this was so good. Can't you write more for it though? I'm aching to hear more of this story!

This is a great story I'd like to know what Tristan does to the Roman but even if you don't continue this story I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I really really liked this. You could expand upon this, even if you only add another chapter or something. It could really develope into something even more excellant than it already is (I hope that made sense... I'm kinda multitasking right now). Anyway, Maybe we'll see something more to this soon? If not, I look forward to reading more fanfictions from you in the [hopefully] near future!
x3*Mary

gods, I love Tristan, too!!^^
But couldn't you just once give him a happy ending??

Soo, anyways, storys real good, though I'd love to see it continue on.. no, I think the beginning would be missing then... I just think that the plot is great material for a longer story, but don't mind me...It's very good as it is!!

I hope you're not going to leave Tristan alone, though I'd like to see him happily in love and all that ^^

you should continue the story. good job ally

Sweet. I like Bree - it's a nice idea to have her as Dagonet's sister. You gave her a sense of quietness that was rather endearing - well done.