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Looking forward to your next one ;) ^_^

beautifully done! Very well conveyed, and extremely...well, for lack of a better word, extremely 'Toph'. I love this to pieces.

and congratulations! You picked the one little relationship EVERYONE loves. (at least, if they don't...they should.)

~Rm.

Cute I liked it

This story is very good. The thoughts of Toph are well portrayed in my opinion. She really is a determined individual.

Good work for a first time in Avatar.

Cygnus

*in a childlike voice* Can I have some more please? Pretty please with sugar on top? *normal* this is really good. Not too OOC.

It's short, but a very good start. I look forward to your next update.

Nice... I'll stay tuned for your next one.

That was not rough at all, wonderful job! TOKKA ROCKS!

I like it. It Is a little choppy, but yay! tokka!!