A great story. Very good.

really made me feel the conflict that Anakin faced in episode 3, great story,

Yes, you are a geek. Know what? It's great.

If Lucas were this good a writer, I'd definitely have liked the prequals better. You did here what the prequals failed to do for me, and made that struggle that Ani had to go through a visceral thing.

A point I noted: he never seems to refer to the Dark Side as 'Evil.' I think that is a signifigant point. To him, the Dark Side seems to represent pragmatism, more than any sort of sin, per se. That's where the danger lies.

Love to see you branching out into new fandoms, something I'm trying to do myself, and look forward to seeing where you go in the future.

:( So sad. Probably just about what Anakin would have been thinking. Very good!

~Hilary