Aw =) That was so sweet; the way you write it I could imagine each detail perfectly. Nice job!

Cute. = )

aww thats so sweet and playful!

Very cute!

so super cute! we need more billxfleur fics! that was nice.

sweet!!

I know it sounds unoriginal and generic but: AW, cute!

How adorable! You write Bill/Fleur very well. Anatomy of a Voyeur was one of the first fics I read on here, and even though this story takes quite a different direction, I love them both. Your work is quite delightful. :]

yeah, you go fleur! lol. funny. i'd smack him too. good job!

i like it, plz rite more with thier girl.

that's funny that her name is Genevieve. That's Ginny's full name, if I remember correctly, JK told us on her site.

this was cute! Keep it up!

Aw, cute! I love Genevieve and how her speech is exactly like that of a 3-year old. Reminds me alot of me when I was that age. All cute and adorable. And I love how you have that children's rhyme in there. Y'know I had completely forgot about that poem until I read it here. Thanks! For the story and for the memory of that poem.

Thats cute!
KDC^or^Liz-E

how sweet, and short! I loved it, but please write something longer!.. I just love this couple.. and this gorgeous little angel was a perfect touch to the story. with droll and all heheh. =)