Ooh, excellent story beginning! I can hardly wait to see what happens next... assuming there's another update, of course. ;) (I certainly hope there is!) Thanks for writing.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I think Jack & Maddie should find out Danny's secret and accept him. Clockwork could become his godfather (and ghostwriter could be Jazz's), He could keep Cujo (ghost dog) as a pet, and maybe have Jack & Maddie adopt Dani.

Its been two years I think its time you update!

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

You should include Skulker, Walker, Technus, Johnny 13, Box Ghost, & Nocturne for bad guys. Good guys being Dani, Clockwork, & Wulf. Maybe Frostbite too.

You have a good sense of details. Me likes...

Why didn't his ghost sense go off?

“Wow, I’m beat. Mind if I get this bed? I like the window view.” *jumps and nearly falls out of her chair* What the-? Where did - ooh, is he a ghost? Tell me he's a ghost. A boy ghost who's gonna hit on Danny. *cough* Sorry, I'm a hard core slasher. Ignore that last part. Anyway, you're writing is pretty good - interesting, no spelling/grammer mistakes...although you better update some time soon, yes? I need to know about that ghost boy! ...who is apparently going to share Danny's room *cough* UPDATE.

Oh. I like this. I like this lots. ^^b Is this a real hotel?

Please update this soon!

real potential here. i like it. can't wait for an update!

wow... it's 11:30 pm... i'm pooped!

haha, this is awesome!xD
hee, Danny has a roommate, well that explains the two beds.xD hope they get along well! X3
Gah! I can't wait to see what happens next, and curious to see what that machine thing they were talking about is.
I just love stories where Danny's parents are really involved, and this rocks!

I want that 2 minutes of my life back.

I'm not even gonna ask...

Hahahaha me loves it too! This chapter was funny, just as you said. You know what? Ima gonna leave a longer comment than Nicole. . .JUST CAUSE I CAN! WOT!

. . .

So spring break is next week. Yup. Can't wait. We'll be able to spend more time on the phone. And I do call back. No matter what you say. I'm good about calling back! Honest!

xD

Okays, maybe not the best in the world. But I'm still call you back! Yup.

. . .
I wonder how much of last night you remember. I think I'm gonna quiz you later on . . .xD
YAY QUIZES!

Wow, I just said YAY QUIZES. I TAKE IT BACK. QUIZES STINK. AND SO DO GUESSING GAMES. Yup.

Is my review longer than Nicole's yet? I still need to see Samauri Danny. Tis the sexy, I know. I need to see it. you need to send me teh eppi. Along with those songs. You remember, donchya? I remember. You remember, I remember, Jack remembers, Nicole remembers WE ALL REMEMBER YAY WE WIN!

Wait- what are you remembering again? I forgot.

Haha, your other reviewers are probably looking at this one and thinking 'WTF? THAT PERSON ISH INSANE!'

YAY FOR BEING INSANE! I ISH YOUR INSANE FRIEND! *clings* WOOT!

*pokes*
I updated my profile. You should go read it. Like, now. Yup.

Lalalalalala.
Is my review longer than Nicole's yet?

I KNOW SPOILErS DANNY'S ROOMATE ISH SEXY (But Justin is sexier) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHa!
Does that make me a winner? It should. I should be a winner. In fact, I am a winner.
Wait. . .*looks at Nicole's random fact* Santa has all the letters of Satan. That's kinda funny. . .

xD

I wonder how long this review is. Can't make it any longer cause the bell just rang. I BID THEE FAREWELL AND I SHALL TALK TO YOU ON THE PHONE LATER TONIGHT!

~December'sRose aka ME aka Symone aka December'sRose. Cause I'm cool. B)

haha...at least he's got some manners...right?