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| My-name-is-foxglove 2007-11-01 ch 4,  | abuseReally?! OH! Now that is just plain evil! I am so sorry that they hacked into your account! I was wondering why things had suddenly felt a bit...different. |
| milkshakelvr 2007-06-16 ch 4, | abusei ve heard of that persom(s) they gave this really mean review they are EVIL! |
| Dolphinbreeze 2007-03-28 ch 4, | abuse(GASP)How horrible! Wait do you mean chap.3, S.A.T.O? Because I haven't been on Fanfic for a while! |
| Lulu and Neo 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseYou JUST figured it out. We wrote that chapter way back when. It was funny, and guess what? People LIKED it better. I don't know what that says about your writing talent, but it can't be anything good. Ta ta, Lulu |
| cratbro 2007-03-09 ch 4, | abuseGeeze, Richard is an idiot in this chapter. Why did he lie to Kori like that? He felt he had to tell her that he wanted to break up, but insulting her like that was just twisting the knife, he didn't need to do it. Good story, keep it up. |
| XxStarRobinxX 2007-02-16 ch 4, | abuseHow could you make Richard do that! >< I hope you get them together and have Carmen and Kitten pay. nice story overall |
| addicted2danny 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abuseaw... so sad. |
| J.C Andrews 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abuseI LOVE IT |
| Blueyedgirl 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abuseLoved the chappie! Thought it was really well written! Anyways, Can't wait for the update! mucho amor, ~JaX |
| artsydarts 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abuseI'd have to say that this is my favorite chapter out of all of them (and they were all great)! The characters become so well defined in this chapter and the plot thickens. Plus, the music you chose was great! I also like that show "Rome" (I know, complete geek, but what did you expect?) so I'm glad you included it. I hope Rachel gets a backbone soon, though, because she shouldn't be taking that from her abusive boyfriend. Anyway, great, great job! |
| artsydarts 2007-02-12 ch 3, | abuseOh, a plan! I'm so excited to see what happens next! |
| artsydarts 2007-02-12 ch 2, | abuseI really like how well defined the characters are. Great chapter! |
| artsydarts 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat chapter! I think this is a great idea. |
| pimpofthetitans 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abusewicked sweet stuff man your school is so real its scary. anyway the flamer is gayness he doesnt know art like i do and this is defenintly art in its finest. how you make ppl feel so real so alive so personal. your doing great keep it up. and make gar kick mal. in the nuts. and then lets have mal go with kitty to get rachel jelous and them ending up tourchering eachother lol 2 evals dont make a right they make pain. |
| ahilty 2007-02-12 ch 4, | abuseNice start. This is a pretty intreasting story. I know you probably are sick of hearing this, but the characters are acting a bit out of character. Since this is an AU fic that is not too much of a problem as it would be had you decided not to write an AU fic, but keep this in mind for any other stories you write that are not AU. The only real objection I have is that you seemed to have sapped away most of Raven's backbone (but since she is in an abusive relationship in this fic I suppose that is natural). Once again, this is good. So keep writing. |