Hahaha, brilliant!

Ha! Cute.

Wow, this was so great! I loved it! Even without being really descriptive, it was funny and sexy. "Go to hell." "Not without you." XD

Like... Oh my god... Holy... F*ck! I was laughing my ass off, this was so freaking hilarious X'D Keep up the good work!

Gah. I can't even begin to explain how much I love this :D

You really are talented; the dialogue in this is brilliant XD

Oh, and the ending is absolute love.

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kyah *faint* that was the best, thankyou!

I like it! Strange format, but is nice XD
Kisses from Argentina!

lmao. that's brillaint XD XD XD
lmao!

Guuh... that was amazing!

AH! OMG! this was the best!! -flails arms frantically-
Very simple but hot and entertaining. I loved it!
And... omg, that one part "OW! What the hell?? My nipples never did anything to you!" just killed me. I never laughed that hard before in my life! XD
great job once again! :3

I think I've read this about seven times.
It never fails to amaze me, though. :D

Aww! So cute and funny! Me like! Sorry I can't say more!

Lovely story!! I love this pairing

nyeheheh...that was incredibly adorable. Gawd, that dialogue just suited them SO well and it really seemed to fit. I loved it. You did a great job with this personalities with only dialogue! Amazing job.

lol!
Nice story!