P.S. please write more.. i love it

I think a staff as a weapon and a fox for a Familiar

I like it! keep writing/. ^-^

I think there definately needs more reason why Pendragon is there. But I'm interested in seeing what kind of crossover a Ben 10 and Final Fantasy would bring.

I also suggest for a weapon, a staff. Yuna had one, right? And going through traditional role play games, mages tend to have simple weapons such as staff, dagger, and heavy reliance on their spells.

And I suggest a black cat... because with Gwen being Lucky Girl, I think that the stories of black cats and luck would tie in nicely with her.

to lazy to sign in. I think Gwen should train with a staff, that when a little magic is put into it, can change it's form to like a spear or syith. As for a familair, I kinda like foxes myself.

Don't know about the familiar but how about something unusual for the weapon say...a chain

ok, Pretty good story, but I think it goes a touch too fast. Pendragon's appearance sort of pops out of nowhere, and... everything else just kinda goes a bit too fast, that's all. And I don't think Gwen would've taken the 'voice in her head' just as lightly as you explained, or maybe she would. She did see her older self performing magic just in the last episode, ben 10,0... Oh, and it would be nice if you'd've written out "Diamond Head". it makes it go smoother.

Well, it's still an interesting and origional idea for a story. I like where it's going... Gwen's gotta get her magic somehow, right? anyways... I think Gwen's familiar should be a snow tiger, but that's just me. and as for the weapon, if you're doing a crossover with Final Fantasy, why don't you just choose a weapon they use? might as well. If not, how bout a staff? she's already used one in 'Washington B.C.'. Keep up the good work,
~avearia