"Don't cry, Fran, we don't have to have cockatrices"- Balthier is too cute!! =^_^=

That was so adorable! xD I loved this story. It was really great! I just love that couple! I think I'm gonna fav it! ♥

Keep writing!

Check my C2. I have dozens of them.

Wow this was super

To write truly touching love stories, you have to have had a broken heart. So...Who broke your heart, love?

Hm. That was nice and warm. Just the right amount of drama touched with humour - "we don't have to have cockatrices." Great little piece.

- Sakura

Adorable! *gushes*

... I don't want to think of him dying!

>_< balthier can't die! even years from now!

fran needs to somehow find a way to extend his life!

*sniffle*

very lovely and moving fic!

Nice! That was very sweet and well written, Arisa. Hope you write more.^__^

wait... did the sexyy balthier just died!? aww. but aside from that awesomee job! the endingg sorta made me cryy. xDD dont wry thats a good thing. u know how to add the right amount of emotion into ur stories.

Awh, that was fabulous. :D

Once you mentioned Cockatrices, I knew this was going to be one of my favorite FFXII fics.

Just the image of the both of them tending the cockney-speaking rolly pollies is too charming, even if the story was meant to be a little angsty.

GAH! I love it! you better write more! ^^

This is great! Well written, you're just like me. I love seeing the guy go down and all that angst. Finally, some Balthier/Fran action!! I've been looking all over for it ever since I got the game! They're meant to be together!!

Aw, your story is so cute!!

I like Balthier/Fran stories, too. I think of all the FF couples, their my favorite. I hope you write more of them! XD