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| o Kirjava o 2007-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseI really like your story! Especially the part in the kitchen! Write more like that^^ |
| Contra Mundi 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseNicely written, my dear! Leon was a little out of character at the beginning, but he got better. The end was sweet, fluffy. ^_^ I had rather expected Count D to start going on about how the Indians helped the Americans when they were hungry, but then the bastards went and massacred them to get at their land. I liked the way you managed to come up with the woman and her dog and still make it really plausible. I understand how Count D feels about Thanksgiving and I can just imagine how awkward he feels. Heck, I never celebrated Thanksgiving in my life until this year. I love the part with Leon making Count D cook the home-made pumpkin pie. That part was love. ^_^ But I really don't understand how people can like that stuff. >_< All in all, wonderfully written. Characters were all more or less in character, excepting the few awkward moments in the begining. But that got much better. You ought to write more COunt D/Leon. Can't get enough of it. Loved the ending. Oh, and Leon calls Count D 'D'. Just 'D'. |
| Werewolf DM 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseMy family always has beets. Oh, and yams of course. I loved the story, you really kept the characters in character. :) |
| Akunen 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, a Thanksgiving fic! You're right, I don't see them too often. Lovely story. I loved it when Count D found out what Leon meant by homemade. xD I have some weird foods too. We have ham and turkey, cause my father and I aren't fond of turkey. And we have this weird pineapple casserole, and this year we have greens... Yep. |
| Misura 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseA superb read, completely in the spirit of PSoH, but with a softer edge to it, in the spirit of the holiday. I liked how you translated Chris' special kind of speech to a non-drawn media - the italics worked very well for me. D and Leon's interactions were great, too. ^-^ |
| Mr.Block 2006-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseXD NICE! love the way you kepted it in charector, right on! ^_^ Happy Thanks Giving!! |