yay happy ending!
awesome! more please even though this story is from like 2 years ago lol

This is really good! I think you might want to work on length, though.
And, just wondering, but did you mean Silver Kiss? Sliver Kiss is kind of odd, but it sort-of fits. I just thought Silver would fit better.

Oh well, I look foward to reading more from you.

Ciao!
-Felicity Black

it's really good, but it was too short. I want you to write another story, and i want it to be longer. you're too good not to write longer ones...