Wow; your Mako has actual character! She deserves it, and having real character suits her, but judging by the quality of the offerings on this site she must be a pretty hard person to write well. Congratulations on your sucess!

The spelling and grammar are both excellent - which always adds serious brownie points to any fan fiction. The formatting is perfect, drawing the reader down through the page without unnecessary chopping and changing.

Also, plot and humour-wise, (considering I laughed for about five minutes at Kun. finding Min. by staking out a department store), you obviously have a bit of a gift for writing - I love the situations you’ve put these folks in.

Thank you very much for an hour and forty-five minutes well spent.

These are so beautiful! I love them!

I love the wizard of Oz books. NAd I used to have Ozma on my wall. :) this was a silly and vividly written chapter. Thanks!

I love this story. Its really great how you include all these lil snippets together. I don't much care for the childhood ones or the AU but everything else is great. I wanna see more Kunzite/Mina!

aaww I like how you had the Nephrite and Naru part. I love Nephrite/Makoto personally but I had always wondered how Naru would react to Nep being back in the flesh. I enjoyed it a lot :D

hey! I would never have continued reading this had your writing not been so easy and nice. It was a sweet story and it ended well. I'm glad it all stuck together- I worry about the anime and the SenshixShittenou relations. This puts me at ease. Thanks.

::squeal:: THAT WAS SO GOOD! UMINO IS HER SOULMATE! AH! KAWAII! I WAS SO SCARE WHEN YOU BROKE THEM UP! AND REI AND JED ELOPED! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THIS WAS SO GOOD! ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^

Well done I liked how the way things worked out between the two.

Yay, you updated. It been a long time. I think this is the first time I read Nephrite and Naru characters interact in a non-evil setting and have their issues address in a well-written form. You didn't make it seem ooc. Great job. Hope you update soon. Until next time, take care and god bless.

It's been such a long time! I'm glad that you updated! I love it!

*squee!* You updated! You made my bad day so much better!

I loved this chapter. I always wondered what would happen if Nephrite came back (non-evil), and how things would be with him and Naru! This was perfect! It addressed all the issues, I think, and yet Naru doesn't hate Mako ^_^

I hope you keep going with this story! It is so great . . .

That was awesome! I never thought about what Naru would do if Nephrite came back; what a fascinating concept! :D Great job!
~Amunet 8D

I finally stopped laughing long enough to review ^_^ This chapter rocked! I loved seeing all the players in it, and misinterpretation is always fun! So wonderful!

Please update soo!

This chapter made me laugh!! "That was Mars, alright. She never was one to go down alone if she could take someone else with her." I loved this line ^_^

So cute yet so sad! How old is Nephrite suppose to be if Mako is around a first grader? And I thought it so sad how you hinted at their deaths, knowing this was when they die. It was really touching.

This chapter also made me wonder what they would be like if/when they have kids ^_^