Unique intro. Well done.

Let's see a little more of the story before we judge.

Nabiki with pre-cognition. As if she wasn't clever enough. It's just scary.

Unless Mutant-detecting machines are common place, it's likely that no one will even know she's a mutant. The power isn't visible or particularly noticeable. It's effects on her success and behavior are noticeable, but she's always displayed remarkable foresight.

She could also potentially see suspicions forming and deliberately school her behavior to dispel suspicions. She's Nabiki -- she did that even BEFORE she had a super-power that would let her do it even better.

Finally, it's NERIMA. No one's going to bat an eye about mutation.


On the possibility of Ranma getting the hammer, I don't like it. Ranma's not the hammer type. (If anything, he's the polearm-type. Were I to give him a magical weapon, it would be a staff with a Kinjakan head on one end and a Gekkaja head on the other. A Fire-and-Ice staff makes for powerful Hiryu Shouten Ha variations.)

Akane doesn't have the monopoly on mallets that people seem to think (the first appearance of a mallet in the manga was thanks to Kodachi, who tried to use it on AKANE, oh irony). Even so, I think she's a hammer-type fighter.

Of course, DB Sommer's "Avenging" already features Akane getting Thor's hammer. Which is not to say it couldn't be done again, and done well and enjoyably.

Perhaps even more so than Akane, Ryouga is more suitable for Thor's hammer than Ranma. I don't think I need to explain why.

I can tell that Nabiki will get taken down a peg or two when she finds out that she is a mutant and will soon be hated by her family and maybe her friends, but then again what was to like about her in the first place? She is just a caniving manipulative bitch, hell she already has a plan to force Ranma to be near Kuno against his/her will.

This could be interesting. I'm tempted to write my own Ranma/Marvel cross, so I'm particularly interested in what you do for this story.

Thanks!

Nice crossover.

This is a good start. I'm very curious where it will go and hope to see some quick updates.

Very Intrigued, looking forward to the next installment

This one has an intriguing, if not interesting, beginning for quite a story. The fact that I found this while looking for Ranma/Nabiki stories, also made me take notice. Personally, I like this pairing more than any others, but if by some chance that were to change as the chapters come, then I don't mind. This story has peaked my interest, even if it did confuse me a bit in the beginning. Keep writing this story, as I'd like to see where it goes from here.
Obviously Nabiki has become a mutant, and I wanna see what this will mean for her life when it all comes out. Also, I do hope that the person who'll recieve the shadow of Thor's hammer is none other than Ranma. I'd like to see what a Ranma influenced by Thor's hammer will look like, plus what new challenges await him as a global guardian.

Interesting. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Not sure what's going on, but I am sure that I want to read more of this. It sounds very interesting.

Nabiki must die. This power is too much for someone with no morals, no conscience and no thought of anyone else as anything other than things to extract money and other benefits from.