I really had no clue where this was going, but then... The end! Sigh. How cute. I'm still devastated about Charlie.

BEAUTIFULLY written.
one of the best stories on the site!

Oh very nice. It's interesting to see how Hiro has evolved because of what has (or is going?) to happen. And even though I was anticipating the last line, it still made me really sad.

Nicely done!

oh! that's so cute that he grew it for charlie! dude, ted can be such an a'hole huh?

nice little story. I'm a little lost. who's ted? was he introduced yet? Matt is the cop, but Which one is ted?

Abosolutely incredible! It's nice to see a more serious side of our dear Hiro, but it fits-- he is somewhat prone to guilt, at least judging from what I have seen of him. I think the characters fit well together here, even though they haven't yet had a whole lot of bonding time yet in the series. I think you hit the concept very well.

Beautifully written, as well. I like the focus on their thoughts.

Hmm. I don't think I ever imagined Peter as this prone to musings... but I think I believe that of him. Thank-you for revealing the possibility of that side of his nature. I really loved the musings here and their roundabout fashion. Nice, good thoughts, and the dim suggestion that plenty of things have already happened. Very well-done.

This was amazing.
I loved it.
It made me smile.
Good Job!

Oh, I absolutly adore this!

*favorites*

~Ultra-Geek

hey that was a good oneshot.

Wow, nice :)