SOO WEEIIRRD is the fourth chapter. I tried doing Miaka's English voice with the British accent and I just had to laugh.

~Mira

EW! ! ! ! ! ! ! MiakaxCHICHIRI? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? GROSS! ! ! But it was a really funny fic. I like the second oneshot the best. *snicker* "Two-Faced-Dumb-Blonde-That-Crushes-Cute-Little-Yellow-Birdies-With-His-Bare-Hands". *is laughing so hard that she cannot put her signature here*

ok i know my name is charmed-freak but i also like fushigi yugi
these were some funny fics. but my question is why would you make nuriko and hotohori wear strait jackets to bead...but it was funny. i love the story about nuriko. please keep writing more of these stories there great.

This was a lovely pov study of Nuriko. The imagery of the rose petals flying away as each person was remembered was deeply poignant and affecting. I especially liked how you had him remembering his 'old' self, and how he came to the conclusion that it was okay to resurrect that person.


I do have one beta suggestion, for whatever it'd be worth to you. Take a look at the third paragraph from the bottom and consider making it into three separate paragraphs. There are a lot of terrifict ideas and emotions presented there, but their impact is lessened a bit by being melded into one huge section of text.

*doffs beta cap*

You show great grasp of characterization and insight throughout this piece. I'm impressed, and I want to give you major props for expanding the scope of your writing. *cheers you on*

All the best,
KittyLynne

LOL! To be honest, I didn't find this to be pointless. I think you did a great job of pinpointing Tasuki's appeal to females of all ages.

1.) He's got unexpected and hidden depths to his personality.
2.) He's a great combination of sweet and sour.
3.) He's a challenge.

I liked the gentle, self-deprecating humor you used in this. The ending was excellent--irony and an answer all in one. *grin* Great job!

All the best,
KittyLynne

*grin* I'd say it's Blink 182 combined with Monty Python...

Tamahome: (bleeding profusely) "'Tis only a flesh wound!" (scoots along on his backside and tries to embrace Miaka with his legs)

The idea of Miaka having a British accent was funny, but I couldn't quite picture her as a sadist/domanatrix...but that's what makes it a dream, ne? ^__~

All the best,
KL

ROTFL! Next to 'Hang in There Nakago', which was written by Watase herself, this is the funniest parody of Nakago I've ever read.

The 'male Cruella DeVille...Nakago as a Yu-Gi-Oh card...*collapses in laughter*

Thank you for a wonderfully fun read. :D Must read and review your other one shots as well. ^^

All the best,
KL

I loved it! The last chapter made me see Nuriko's POV in a different way. Very original! I've never thought about it that way before.

aiya! this is so nice! i loved everything... i like your stories... especially the tasuki/nuriko ones... more power to you! i LOVE the nakago chappie... *hearts*

Humiliation, i just couldn't stop...it was so funny loved it ^^

Oh my god, that was really sad, it nearly made me cry. I loved how Nuriko thanked everyone with the rose petals. And the last one for Ryuuen was just so right, that he was regretting not having been Ryuuen all those years. This is one of the best oneshots I've ever read, I love it.

*sniff* I am not joking with you here. I had to stop midway through reading this and grab some tissues. This is...beautiful. No other words do it justice. Ryuuen...the petals...the tears. You have captured the real Nuriko, imo. Thank you.

Ya know, I never thought I could actually feel sympathy for Nakago *even after we saw what happened to him just before he died I still hated him*, but after reading this, I actaully kinda pity Ye Olde Evil One..heh heh..kinda would like to see lightning collide w/ Tomo's head also, kakakakakakaka!

No no, the story wasn't pointless at all! I thought it was well thought out and written. I can so picture The Man w/ the Fan *fangirl sigh ^_~* acting like he did and doing exactly what he did *ie: the kiss before he left*

This inspired me to look at your other stuff and it's equally as well done. I hope to see more from you in the very near future

Ok, that was weird...way weird (*scratches head*). And you're a real Tasukiac (Tasuki+maniac), tee hee, lol!!