that was really good! i love it. your characterization of everybody was eonderful! especially Brainiac. as i was reading it, i could perfectly imagine them saying those things! awesome job! the ending was really good too.

again, awesome job!

-D

Err...i really didnt get the end...I watched the animated version on the computer...and there was only 12 episodes on season one so im wondering if im missing something going on. Cause i also remember my brother was watching it this morning and something about Superman cant remember something. Someone care to explain to me? :'(

Very sweet. I like how you expanded the episode and Superman's interaction with people. I also liked the Bouncing Boy quote that Brainy used.

Another great story! The chemistry between the team members is right-on.

Well done! You did a great job keeping everyone in character and getting inside their heads. You should write more little "missing scenes" like this!

YES! YES! THIS is what I'm looking for! Honestly, I was searching for Legion of Superheroes fanfics from the first episode I found. BAM! Except when I searched, it was all about the old one and not from the KidsWB version. But as I saw more popularity with the show, (finding clips of it on YouTube) I tried once more for the fanfics and found something PERFECTO!

It truly was perfect. The characters were totally in character. It had a hint of Brainiac x Superman (which I hope either you or someone else will elaborate further, since it's SO OBVIOUS Brainiac likes him)... it was truly amazing. I wrote a Brainiac x Superman fanfic myself, but after seeing no one else (according to the fanfics) liking the pairing, I decided not to "air" it. Plus, I put in that question of Brainiac asking Superman if he wanted to go home, not aware anyone else was thinking the same thing. However, since you put this up, and it has to do with the KidsWB version, I might as well.

Yay! Brainiac 5 goodness abounds! I really hope they bring up Brainy's evil linage in the series. I think that would make for a great episode. Keep up the great work!

-dies again-

Brainy: I didn't do it! -runs away-

Me: .V. Someone's been overcharged.

Anyways...your plot bunny is smarter than mine. Curse you, plastic moldsman... (I LOVE that movie!)

YAY! Brainy's so cute! I love your story keep it up!

Woah...This is definitly going into my favorites! Awesome job!