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BloOm
2009-10-20 . chapter 4
update please :'(
BloOm
2009-09-12 . chapter 4
Please please please update !
I want to know what's going to happen... I want Voldemort to find out that it was Harry who "stabbed" Bellatrix :p

Update !!
BloOm
2009-09-09 . chapter 4
please update :(
BloOm
2009-09-06 . chapter 4
update please :(
AfricanSavannah
2009-08-26 . chapter 4
This story really appeals to me and I hope you update soon. I enjoyed the foreshadowing of the dagger and consequentially the poison belonging to Harry back when he decided against telling Voldemort he was skilled with knives. Your characters are remaining consistent throughout, however before I can be certain of this I would have to read the story in its entirety (HINT, HINT). I'm looking forward to you revealing whether or not Harry admits that the dagger is his in time for Bellatrix to survive, and if so, his motivation behind ruining his harmless image, and Voldemort's potential reaction. Then again, in chapter 4 it is not clear that Voldemort believes Harry when he plays down his ability with the dagger. So it is entirely possible that Voldemort will discover or at least suspect and possibly confront Harry about inflicting Bellatrix's injury. Voldemort's reaction in that scenario would also be rather entertaining. However it is not outside the realms of plausibility that Harry could claim to know of the poison but deny his involvement, were that to be the case Voldemort might legilimise him, assuming that Voldemort is a legilimens in your story.
If Bellatrix survives, it would be interesting to see if she holds what many people have interpreted as an infatuation Voldemort. That, depending on Voldemort being obvious in his affections, could spark some interesting interactions between Harry and Bellatrix, or Bellatrix and the Dark Lord.
Arbitrary Doom
2009-08-21 . chapter 4
...i like it thus far...please continue...
bananacupcakes
2009-07-31 . chapter 4
Please continue :)
Dark Goddess of Chaos
2009-07-28 . chapter 4
i like this so far!1 write more! dont tske to long please cause then i will prop forget it so hehehe
freakishmind
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
totally cool!
trisha_buglenton
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
i love the story. please continue this, would u?
nelly
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
i love voldemort's perverse mind thoughts. it's really interesting, the chemistry between harry and voldemort. everybody cool see the old man drooling over that little boy. chap 3 is my favourite
nelly
2009-07-16 . chapter 3
really amazing,. we should read more of this. write more soon
nelly
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
i loved it. amazing
megblue
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
dude. we love this story. it had been too long since you update. can you update more chapters. please. we really want to read more of this. just dont leave it on the way
Srta.Kinomoto
2009-07-07 . chapter 4
Love the fic!

Can't wait for the next!

Ja ne. ;D
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