OOooooh! I loved that story! Heheh...I luv Raichu X3 It was just...amazing...heheh write a qequel or something!

Please to the tenth power of PLEASE write more, I beg of you! This story has sooo much emotion and you write your characters so well, it needs another chapter. If ya don't, I sic my Gyarados, Baby, on ya! ohwaitaminute, water innt good against electric types, nevermind. But I'll still bug you for more anyway ;)

::sobs:: Its so wonderful! :}

That was the best Pokemon fan fic I've ever read, honestly! The way to described everything. Raichu's also my second favorite Pokemon, and I think that Raichi's a cute name!

hmm... Raichu has orangish fur with black eyes, so i don't really get how u got that part about the yellow hair and brown eyes... oh well, you're the author, if that's how you want it, then so be it. I would have said something else myself. Anyways, it's a really cool story 'bout a Raichu, but it was a bit hard for me to read though. (I dunno, it might be because of the font, spacing, whatever)

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This was a very touching story!

CLAP! GOOD JOB! 5 STARS!

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Really cute! I hope you plan on doing more stories on Electra and Raichi!