I liked it, and yes, you write about things no Mormon girl should. And as a Catholic girl I read about things no catholic girl should. I'm glad to say we are on the same boat.

Anyway. I found that the story was true to the show, it didn't seem out of character, which is hard to do. I think you should go on writing to your hearts content. The only thing that I can say is, I think the story could have done without the bit at the end (you know what I'm talking about) I don't think that Scully, just three days after being electrocuted and then shocked back to life, would be able to do that. But like , it's fanfiction, the facts don't matter that much. I suppose it;s a matter of taste but I would have liked it to have ended a little more innosent. I just felt that it didn't work well with the rest of the story, it seemed rushed to me. But again, that's just my personal preference.

:D finally read it and loved it - definately should have been practicing for my french oral tomorrow but i couldn't help it was hooked within the first few paragraphs as per usual

glad that they didnt get away VERY easily- made for a better story - but i was so shocked when melinda killed ethan! really thought it would have been scully! ah well - it was so sad when she locked the door behind them :S

ah mulder and scully gotta love them - definately think were gonna like whats coming up next chapter - for a start we've got mulder in his boxers...ahem sorry!

and now im completely lost... ah well - hope you update something soon :)

oh my god..plz finish fast...it urges me to finish this story

im crying..im crying so f-ing much..tears still drop from my eyes im hearing a bunch o f slow and meaningful songs. im dying deamon, thi story is killing me lol (its not ur fault actually)

damn...wow lol

mulder is so romantic..it makes me cry lol the only bad thing is that bitchy man looking at them and scheming...omg lol

this story is going great! and yes i'd love the web-address of the orig. story...thank you so much

Hehe, thank you for finally writing! Please keep writing!

OOH! What happened? I sense something funny!

Please, please, please update soon! (you got me to beg! lol) This story is awesome, I love it! Oh and did I miss something, or did you post the original site? Thanks for posting!

i love this update soon:)

Great chapter! I really loved how you described their feelings, and the tension between them. I can't wait until I get to read the next chapter!

aw, cliffhanger, lol. really good chapter, u haf to write more soon!

OMG, you left me wanting more! How dare you! Well, anyways, please keep writing!

FREAKING A! man i went to go hit the button that would take me to the next chapter AND IT WASNT THERE im going to lok up that story! AH i cant take it no more!