Ha, I love it, especially the end of it. It's the perfect EdWin story. LOVE IT!

Very nice, and entertaining; the ranting of Ed was in character, and Winry was well written, as was this story. All in all, great work.

Take care,

September's Nobara.

ah that was so cute i love ed and winry fics!

Haha, cute.

I like who Ed and Winry are kept in character and they aren't exaggerated. Good job; it flows well.

this was totally cute!

I LOVE IT

I agree with Winry and Trisha he is stubborn

"Adds to c2 and faves"