Good grammar and spelling (except you spelled argument wrong in the title), I was VERY impressed with your dialogue, which seemed really good. I, personally, am not at all fond of the Fred/George relationship, because it's freaking gross. Not because it's gay, which is fine with me, but because they are brothers. But it was a well-written, nice fic. Which I thank you for.

Lifeisabook

Cute!

I really liked this. FredxGeorge fics are so damn cute!

DAMMIT. I clicked this in sheer curiousity, and now I must find MORE.

I really like this story. Really like it.

*giggle* Hehehe! Well can you blame him? I mean, just take a LOOK at Sirius and it'll have you drooling! ;P Great story!

Aww! Cute! :D

Aw, so sweet and funny! I feel so nostalgic now; this story reminded me how much I loved the twins) (Damn you Rowling!) Lovely ficlet!

*grins* I love it!

"I know"

"Hey!"

"You're supposed to say 'I love you too'"

You tell him, George!

lovely.

hee hee ! cute! love it!

Teehee. Twincest. Nice job writing Fred and George, they sounded very in character.

Val

good lol but its kinda creepy that their BROTHERS lol but niceXD

LOL its cute

I loved this!

You totally got their character and i adored their banter and fluff.

not usually a twincest fan, but this was absolutely lovely in all respects. well done!