Lizzy: *laughs out loud* I give it four thumbs up!

Erin: You don't have four thumbs.

Lizzy: Well, I have two and you have t-

Erin: Paws don't count, plus I didn't say I liked it.

Lizzy: Whatever, shut up. Very good story, I'd give it a 9.5 out of 10.

Erin: I'd give it a negative nine hundred ninety nine quintillion nine hundred ninety nine quadrillion nine hundred ninety nine trillion nine hunded ninety nine billion nine hundred ninety nine million nine hundred nine-

Lizzy: OK WE GET THE MESSAGE! You hate practically every story.

Erin: That's my job, I'm the pessimist, you're the, um, positive person.

Lizzy: Yeah, I'm not always positive, but I choose to be..

Erin: Have you noticed your reviews are always the longest?

Lizzy: Yes. PROBABLY because you always put in your pessimistic comments...

Erin: I told you, that's my job.

Lizzy: Before I draw this out any longer, good job, and good day.

Ok, whatever..., anyway, kool!

Hey, I had a part in the story, but as EVERYONE knows, I am a very crappy writer, and they had to delete it. It really did make the story better, though.

Hio This is my story he just helped a bit with some parts! But we make a good Team!

yep

long...yet good!

that was weird

ko

Damn that was good that Steve guy just didn't know when to quit

you r da bomb

Very good but I think Steve should of appeared less.

Man trende you need to REALLY update this man sorry about not being on icq but uh... my compmessed up and all this stuff so SORRY

much better than mine... very strangely close to my story, seeing as my character's Game Boy sucked her in... oh well, i guess people like the idea i got... check out Catalina Storm's story like this...

hee hee...me like...want more...give 11 from 1-10