This was brilliantly done and very in character. Thank you for writing this. :] I don't see many in character Heroes fics, oneshots or not.

I was especially digging the whole Isaac/Niki thing, great job!

I loved it :)

The only thing that really bothered me about this fic was the broad spectrum of time and the sudden input of information everyone seemed to have. But other than that, this was just fantastic. I'm thinking you're doing this fairly as a character study of Nikki, and it came off well! She was marvelously in character- so was everyone else, for that matter. I loved how her thoughts moved so that we were so personally in contact with her at one moment and so distant the next, great to read. The writing was also spectacular, and I loved the chemistry (or lack thereof) she had with the other characters.

That was great. I love Niki. She's my favorite character.

nice story keep it up i have a story to it is called Heroes remixed

I liked reading this 'fic - it felt like you understood Niki well. I would love to read more. :)

Thanks!