LOL! ^^ too funny ^^

"It's not called in drag if you look totally like a girl." - I hope Waya lives after this comment..

Hikaru's managing to make them dress as girls? Oh, my... I wonder how he talked Waya in to this...

Good luck on that game, Hikaru! *Snickers*

Well written! Fun read!

This made me smile. Thank you.

/Recognition dawned there, but to Touya's pleasant surprise, Waya didn't laugh nor snicker.

"Touya," he said in slight bewilderment, "It's not called in drag if you look totally like a girl."/

Those lines are just hilarious. Oh my, I could totally see that happening. *snicker* I guess it would be better for Touya if Waya did laugh at his . . . look. I don't Touya is feminine either, it's just his hair style.

Hey! I actually think Akira is slightly fememin myself! The ending was really noticable but it was still good! Cookies for you!

This is pretty funny--you have a way with words.

And the reference to Tokyo Crazy Paradise wins.

Ahahaaha. *giggles*


Hikaru had better make it a very good game.

haha fun, well written, done in enough of a round about way that his cross dressing is funny :D

Aww man, that was good. Touya is my favorite character, but we just have to admit it - he looks like a girl. My best friend thought he was. lol
This story is great. I bet Touya got mistaken for a real girl more than once after that! lol ^_^
Keep writing!

omg! this is too cute... *squee!* don't worry. cliched premises don't matter as long as the storytelling is good. ^^ and though i'm a touya fan, i don't feel offended at all! *hugs* great job!

nice^^

oh! *smirk* heheh that must have been a sight...wish I could see it...nicely written, thanks for sharing!

*burst in laughter* Will Waya have strange... Dreams after that? Or Nightmares, shouldI say...