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HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
*promptly dies of laughter*

brilliant! absolutely BRILLIANT!
lol

OH MY GOD
I LOVE IT!
THIS IS HILARIOUS!!
Sorry about the capitals, I'm making a statement.
This is my FAVOURITE FANFICTION EVER!
I can't really think of an improvement, to be honest. It was too funny?
=^-^=

The end was definately the wrong time to try and drink water. I don't know when my throat will recover from that. LOL this was funnier than most I've read tonight. I've got an arranged marriage one in mind but nothing nearly as funny. Good job.

Bloody Hilarious! I had to restrain myself from laughing loudly, so many times.

this is hilarious!!

haha! really funny

I'm choking! Too funny!

You're brilliant. That's all I have to say. :)

disturbing.

HAHAHAHAHAHA! that has to be one of the funniest things I ever read HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST THING THAT I EVER, IN MY ENTIRE LIFE, READ! I AM STILL SNORTING WITH LAUGHTER ABOUT HOW THEY OBLIVIATED CREATURE(HERMIONE DIDN'T KNOW OF COURSE)!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
THAT STORY WAS KEWL!

nice. that. was. hilarious. you are a genius, pastry thing!

needless to say, that was rather weird. and disturbing. but it was funny.

This is a good written story. I have to say it very funny at the same time you have to feel bad for the couple.

OMG THAT WAS SO FUNNY!

GAGGING ON MY OWN SPIT!!


LAUGHING SO HARD!

GINNY-HARRY-OH GAWD THAT WAS TOO FUNNY!