Very interesting, albeit slightly morbid, AU. You did a good job of it. The point of view was pretty solid. The last line sounded ironically casual, too.

I can feel the mood of the fic very well, I especially like the last line.

I agree with Fox. I wonder about the aftermath once the Fabre family falls as well. Both stories are well written and enjoyed. Luke's child persona was well done for the fall. I enjoyed it a lot. =]

Um AU? Or is the Luke from the game the third Luke? vfery good emotion. Poor little Luke taken so by surprise. Guy's hesitation was well done too.

LOLZ, I just couldn't help myself to totally seeing the Guy/Luke-ness of it all. XD Hah, I'm such a horrible person.

Anyway, I liked this. Evil Gai! I was kind of stunned at how this ended up; and young!Luke was so cute. Good job, this is obviously going into my favorites list.

That and you've given me a good idea for thatoneGuy/LukefanficIneverstarted.

-does Guy bow and leaves-

~ASK~

Wow... I love this... for some strange reasons :P I love how Guy hesitated and almost not kill Luke, but ended up doing it anyway.
I am starting to like evil!Guy more and more XD

Oh...so this is an alternative version of what Guy would've done if he had steeled his resolve back then? Wow...how tragic. In this case, his anger was too much, and he would lose somebody he could've been a close friend with. It makes me wonder how his life would go after he finishes with the Fabre family.