OMG! please continue this story! :D its AWESOME

Aww! So cute ^_^ I haven't read a fan fiction in a long time... But I'm glad I read this one. It was very good. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.

~Linkite

-drools all over-

This is one of the best ToS fanfics I've read (and I'm already feeling starved after a day or two scrounging) - the writing brought out beautiful pictures in my mind. :D

AH! WHERE IS THE REST!??!!? WHERE!?!?!?!?

aw, come on! it was getting soo cute n good!! pleaz continue this, PLEASE! i love it, i love it, i love it!

aw, a star pancake! *sighs heavenly* they're (he's) too perfect.

so...good...Raine's a bit OOC though...but still...YOU MUST CONTINUE WRITING!

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i luv this i hope those two end up joinin the party anyway cuz i think it would b weird without them

All right, all right. I know you're tied up in school n' all but... I NEED MORE! Pwease?
The curiosity... the impatience...I CAN ONLY SURVIVE FOR SO LONG!
-LuE

Can't wait to find what will happen next.

ooh I just love the way Raine is investigating! Marvelous! XD

And I hope Lloyd and Genis will join the party anyway. It just isn't the same without them (and I'm quite wishing for some more scenes where Lloyd is angry at Kratos for acting so comfortable with his mother...). Maybe Noishe could play a role in making them cross path?

Anyway, it's a great story. Sweet, funny, but also serious... And maybe many other things I could think about if I were not so tired...

Good Night (or Day, it depends on what part of the World you are now ^^)

Mee Yah

I love this story so far! You've really pined down the characters and they seem a lot more real then usual. Loving your plot too.

Hope you update soon,

Heart of Sorrow

Ooh, Raine's becoming suspicious. Tee hee. ^_^

Muhah. I like their blatant couple-ness as well as all the subtle hintings at... various things.

Maybe with this information, Raine can pick out Mithos, too... *evilgrin*

Oh, and I like your idea about Lloyd and Genis. . . Can't wait to find out what you do on that front.

A new chapter! And it was so cute, especially at the end. Hearts for the kranna-moment! I'm starting to wonder, are you going to use other pairings, or just concentrate on the "main couple"? Not to say that I mind the extra focus on this neglected pairing ^^. Lovely chapter, I hope more is on it's way!

As much as I hate to admit it... Raine's not stupid, and I think she's catching on~ I don't blame her... I just can't wait till Lloyd finds out... *is obsessed with the non-incest father-son relationship* I mean... they make the perfect family... *smiles* it was a good chapter... Kratos is such a good husband.. x3 update soon~

that was really god. Hope the next chapter is just as good hope it comes soon as will. good luck writing it. :)