Hi, i love this!! cudnt stop reading it. Please tell me ur gunna update xx

Love it! I hope you find the time and interest to finish this fantastic work. Thank you!

I absoulutely love this story! PLEASE FINISH your story, you can't leave it at such a cliff hanger!

Can't help but love this story. Too bad I won't get to read the ending... I felt like reviewing anyway though.

*jaw drops*
PLEASE don't leave it like that. please? :(

Oh man! I'm gonna explode from anticipation!

Update, YO! It's a fricking GREAT story!!

WOW! I absolutly love your story, it is one of my favorites. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens. Hope to read more soon.TTFN

i just read the entire story. oh my goodness!

first of all, this is one of the best written pieces of fanfiction i have ever read. you used complex, complete sentenses without grammar or spelling errors, wonderful diction, beautiful character descriptions and development, a lovely story arch, and tasteful intimate scenes. A+!

i want to see what happens next! please put up the next chapter!

when wendy awoke in the nursery in the beginning of the chapter all i could think of was..."what is going on?" I felt very distaught-like, thinking that the whole neverland experience was a dream! then wendy realized her skin was darker and her feet still dirty, and i was like " huh?"

then the end of the chapter described everything! she just had to make her decision secure, according to Walbassa.

I loved the chapter, especially the romance between Jack and tiger Lily and the proclamation of Harry being a girl!..never woulda thought. haha

i really hope the next chapter comes out soon!

your word usage and phrasing is remarkably...enticing.
i love the plot!
and this chapter, like all the ones before it, were striking, leaving a reader in urge to continue with the story.

amazing job!

I loved the first chapter

your writing is wonderful. :D
i love the composition and the descriptions

Your an amazing writer, great job!

LOVE IT KEEP WRITING

I had a dream about this concept then found your story the next day. I love it! What an ending, too. I wish you would continue, if only an epilogue or conclusion of some sort. What a story!

I think this is a great Peter Pan and Wendy story. Definatly unique compared to the other stories here. I really hope that you update soon!

oh no! this isnt fair - but good thing the following chapters have already been posted. i am truly enjoying your story, i just hope that it ends differently then true pan tales (with pan speerated from wendy, him in neverland and her in london)