Over the last 2 days I have read this story & now I am dying to know what happens next! Do you have any plans to come back to this story? I really hope so! I look forward to that time...but, until then, I will check out your other work!

This chapter was fantastic!! The "duck" references were a riot, and then they just continued on to hysterical! When Graham came out with "Daisy" and then said that he rad out of ducks I laughed out loud!

so... any progress on the update? I know last time I msg'd you it was on the 1-year posting date of the last chapter and you were thinking of getting back to it.

I created an account specifically to let you know that this is an incredible story, it's just THAT good I had to do it :). Your writing style is second to none. I understand this story is on hiatus, and I sure do hope it gets finished one day when you're ready, but until then, I just wanted to let you know this is still being read and very much enjoyed. Great Job!!

I still hope that you`ll get this story done in some ways, sometimes. It`s one of my favs :D

So... I LOVE this story and there hasn't been an update in FOREVER! Please post!

Wow. I just spent, like hours reading all 35 chapters. Instead of doing my science project, of course. But it was totally worth it. Unfortunately, I've never seen Manhunter, but that doesn't change how awesome this story is for me. I can't wait til the next chapter!

STEALTH REVIEW! I picked Chapter 2 because, well, I wanted to do Chapter 1 but it wouldn't let me - it said I already left a review for that chapter.

Here's why this chapter is amazing. First, it introduces the comfortable and playful relationship between Grissom and Sara - while keeping them in character. Not a small feat, that. Second, it brings up the tension between Crawford and Will, and at the same time introduces the doppleganger thread. Third, it brings in another murder victim, and her name is Sharon. Horrid, that is. Just horrid that you'd murder someone named Sharon by impaling her on a stick!! *smirk*

Did I getcha? Was this a stealth review or what? *returns to lurk and then stealth review again someday*

My review is a bit late (I was away for a few days) but I have to tell you I am just mesmerized how you minutely describe that elaborate backstory of Justice and how he does what he does.
What struck me in this chapter is how you change your writing style when talking from the POV of different persons (in this chapter the POV of Kitten). One really hears different people talking.
Thanks a lot for this chapter, and I am eagerly awaiting the next update and wth Sara is.

oh no I can't wait that long for an update :D brilliant story, I'm loving every minute of it

"Ah, now that the trees are gone I can finally see the forest."

Things are beginning to get more clear, but what the hell happened to Sara?!

And on a side note, yippy for the next posting date. My B-day is the 9th, so it'll be like an early present. Can't wait.

OMG!! The room was empty . . . damn. Now I have to worry about television Sara trapped under a car in the rain AND story Sara kidnapped by Lark. Eek.

Oh no, where is Sara? Has Justice taken her (if he did: how did he manage it with all that security around), or is Sara AWOL?
I liked the image of Lisa King in handcuffs very much, and how "Daisy" put her into the car (btw, thanks to you I eventually know what "Huey, Dewey and Louie" means - I saw those names before but didn't know the meaning they had, until I looked it up. Here in Germany the three ducks are calle "Tick, Trick and Track")
Thanks for this chapter!

Not sure if I'vereviewed before but this is an excellent suspense filed story. On a par with or better than a great many of today's movie scripts.

I love cliffhangers. And the section about Lisa King and her colleagues was precious. I hope to read more.

Argh! You can't leave us there! You just can't!