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dizzy nic with lamas
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abusethat was sweet!
YusukiShredder
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abuseI LOve this story its so funny and cute! he he... they made out, I have to tease Botan about that later *makes metal note*
Pengin-Alchemist
2007-04-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was quite funny and you are NOT an amateur!!
The way you get inside the character's heads in your stories--
not OOC at all.
Great job, and keep writing! :)
KcrystalLights
2007-03-26
ch 1,
abuseokay...well that was new and I must say some of the characters were a little out of Character! oh well.

I liked you fic very much...*smiles* keep up the good work!
extra-victory
2006-12-19
ch 1,
abuseAHA! You're A PRODIGY
MystiKoorime
2006-12-17
ch 1,
abuseHeyy Heyy

Aw! That was so cyute! I especially liked the end, when Kurama picks up the camera and realizes the cap was still on the lens. Good job! ^.^

Mystik~
anime09
2006-11-29
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosh, that's hilarious...I love the little twist at the end.
blu-babe
2006-11-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was not crappy.

Lol.

I love it, it's so cute ^.^ !

You're a very good writer in my opinion. This is so going on my favourites ^.^
BlueFireIce
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuselol i loved that story. quite funny if you ask me. the end was nice as well. and no the story was not in the least bit crappy. i can imagine hiei trying to hold a video camera still and taping Botan at the hair salon. it is very funny if you ask me
AmandaArtiste
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseXD This was a pretty entertaining story. I like how you kept it flowing and added humor into all the right places. Nice work, very nice. I enjoyed it and found the Hiei/Botan moments (especially toward the end) to be sweet and tasteful. Lol, I like how you ended it too. Keep up the great work.
itachixoxo
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abusedon't be ** yourself i really really like this story it was so funny that i'll be laughing until tomorrow. keep on writing.

-Linna
Youko's Kitsune Girl
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseha! Great twist at the end!! :D Very sweet, keep up the wonderful work! (You don't write like an amateur ;P)
RedRoseInADarkAlley
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abusei LOVED it! hiei forgetting the lens! too cute! and of course he STILL Gets what he wants...total hiei!
midnight 1987
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseXD that was FANTASTIC! Bravo! My hats off to you
xAdorablexAngelx
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! I really loved the ending!
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