this is really, really, really good-i can't believe you've only gotten eight reviews! the last line is amazing- i thought it would say "he had killed her" but having it the other way was a really good twist. ironic, too, seeing as she's dead. xoxNetminderXXpride

Oh, so does that mean Bella's dead in that story? Cus in that case, I won't read it. This was sad enough for me. Great job though..

Aw. I'm so glad I'm not the type to get emotional or I probably would've cried. Poor Edward

Wow! I really enjoyed this...you have a beautiful writing style - and even though this piece is short, it's quite powerful. :-)

Write more Edward x Bella stuff, PLEASE! XD

- Caffeine Lover

That was...amazing. I can't think of anything else to say, and so now I'm responding like other reviewers of this story. :)

TT

Um, you're amazing, just to let you know.

sigh. it's so sad. i really feel for edward here and the love he felt for bella. it's so sad. :(

but good(in the sense of your writing!)

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that's all i can say...

it's so sad...I love it!