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Uh.yeah
2007-04-14
ch 2,
abuseHahahahaha.

Oh, I love Martin and all his weakness, bless him. Poor guy. You have to feel for him.

And I liked the way you described Guy. Methinks he has been up to something...

You gonna do anymore for this? You are? Oh good, that's just what I wanted to hear...

Hehe. Well done for this. :D
Uh.yeah
2007-04-14
ch 1,
abuseOohh... I've been very bad. I'm afraid I had no idea this was here. But don't blame me! Blame my author alerts! They should have told me.

I'm incredibly glad I found this, though.
Cos it had me chuckling all the way through. I loved it. How it's Guy under pressure and you just know, that very soon, he is going to snap.

And snap he did. In the most hilarious fashion, hehe.

Anyway. Well done for this. I shall read the next chapter. Can't wait...
d'Anima
2007-01-06
ch 2,
abuse*giggles* Makes me laugh. I like the first line. Everyone's in character, though Guy's little inside view of himself had me confused for a bit. I laugh at Martin and his incompetence.
glo316
2006-12-28
ch 1,
abusea right laugh...i needed that!...

It worked really well - well done, whoop!

And i too hope the british comedy section takes off and more wingers come over...
d'Anima
2006-12-11
ch 1,
abuseWhoosh. Said I'd review. I'm amused that Schwingen is actually a sport. But you stole the paragrapj about socialising with people from the site. XDD

Ano...very well done though. It maketh me laugh, and it was cleverly done with the idea and the euphemisms. ^-^

However I do need to wee now.
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