wow, that was wonderful. I've also spent a lot of time thinking about Hiro's name, how it's pronounced, and how he's such a good friend to Shu...loved this.

Perfect.

Finally, someone who knows what they're doing on this damn site. Two words: beautiful perfection.

AW, this makes me so sad! :( Poor Hiroshi! :( This is really good.

I love this story!! Its very touching and very good!! It's detailed and makes me feel something. It really fits hiro. This is very good! Great job!