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Wandering-Recluse
2009-05-11 . chapter 5
Ha ha, the Disney comment made me think. What if Phantom got purchased by Disney and they turned it into a cartoon. OH MY GOD! IT'S DEATH BY TORTURE! God help us all!
Wandering-Recluse
2009-05-11 . chapter 4
ha ha, wow, that was surprising...
Wandering-Recluse
2009-05-11 . chapter 3
Oh wow, how cliche. Not that that's a bad thing. Let me teach you the secrets? Sounds like a Star Wars movie! Let me teach you the secrets of the force Christine...

Anyway, yay, Erik makes an appearance!
Wandering-Recluse
2009-05-11 . chapter 2
Really, realatives aren't allowed to work with each other? Strange. Well, it's good to know that this has an actual plot. I expected to have one of those parodies where Erik and Christine mess around in Superstore. This is a very pleasant surprise. Very pleasant...
Wandering-Recluse
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
hmm, usually I don't review individual chapter,I wait till the end but you have brought out the best in me. Especially the Canada part. I live in Canada you see (on the border of Alberta/Saskatchewan and Ontario in the summers.) so that really surprised me, you don't see any good Canada phics here. But Christine and Erik, in Canada in a superstore? Interesting...I don't really shop at superstore myself but my parents drag me there from time to time...
gray seal
2009-02-28 . chapter 20
This...um...was an interesting adventure. But I liked it. Sometimes, sappy is good, and you pulled it off pretty good...pretty well... Haha. I had a good laugh throughout the entire thing *grins stupidly* I'm glad everything turned out great for you in real life, just like this story. Me like.
:D
Embrace-Me-Eternally
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Very nice... hehehe, the cougar line actually made me laugh aloud, and my mum gave me a funny look *laughs*
I like this story, something new and differnt.
Meghan
2008-06-20 . chapter 2
What's in the Superstore hiring kit?
aSqueeintheDistance
2008-06-18 . chapter 20
YAY! (Not cause it's over, cause it's AWESOME! Within Temptation 4eva ;)!)

This is really made of awesome and brightened my world at 1:47 am. Hiding in the bathroom wit teh computer...What, I'll get frikin grounded for being up late...But this is worth it! ;)

luv
squee
aSqueeintheDistance
2008-06-18 . chapter 18
Beautiful but don't worry! It's still hilarious!;)

I want a "Welcome to my Torture Chamber" doormat LOL;)

luv
squee
Avatarded
2008-02-01 . chapter 8
OHLAWD. *dies laughing*
I loved it. I loved the ':-O!!'s and the spamming and OMGAWD ITS TOO FUNNY. -reads moar-
Yossarian22
2007-09-27 . chapter 11
I've been reading this for a couple of days now and have been stuck on it. Usually I would wait to review untill I reached the most recent chapter, but I noticed a typo in this chapter that I simply must point out:

"Rears wet his sweater."

It sounds some what weird.

You should fix it. :P
FlamezBlaze1
2007-07-19 . chapter 20
I LOVED IT! FUNNY! THE DRAMA WAS SO FAKE LIKE A REAL SUPERMAKERT! I WORK IN ONE SO I KNOW ALL ABOUT THE DRAMA! FUNNY!
FlamezBlaze1
2007-07-19 . chapter 3
great idea! i work at dominck's i had this idea a couple weeks ago! i laughed at the idea but it would make work more fun
Belle Princesse168
2007-05-29 . chapter 15
Whoa. What's will all those girls running around the superstore? And why did all the boyfriends decide to come out?
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