AWESOME!

wow.

OMG! You have to continue this! I like Gaara/Hinata couple, I'm kind of new at the pairing, and I haven't come arcoss anything like this. Please write more! ^_^

Wow... I'm sad now... Must... go... read... very... good... Gaara... Hinata...fics...

VERY GOOD!
I must now bash the most awful fathers in the world!
*drumroll*
Hiashi and the fourth Kazekage!

in a twisted way, this was one of the most cutest fics i've ever read :) keep it up ^_^

Sad...good story, but it needs to be a BIT longer...

love the chapter its good
updatesoon.^_^

i really like this fic! i can truly see this interaction happening. besides speculations on hinata's part, it's easy to imagine hinata's life full of pain simliar to gaara's. the two souls really do belong together, but i also feel that their lives are beyond tragic that they ultimately can never be meant to be (just like how it happened here). so just wanted to say beautiful work with this one =]

Wow. I like it very much.

Wah I wanna cry! That was so sad, I enjoyed it.

I'm gonna assume this is the end of the story, so make a new one so I can review it!! ^_^

Interesting...

I think you need to add more. Even though your stories are oneshots, you still need more content and more descriptions.

The two chapters about Gaara and Hinata were quite similar. It seemed as if you only changed a few words.

Try to show the reader what is happening. Don't just tell us: 'He cried.' Show us by saying something like this: 'Tears streamed down his face like a raging river. They flooded his vision, making him blink rapidly. His tongue flicked out, like a snake, and he tasted salt on his lips.' It will make your story sound a lot better, and become longer and more enjoyable to read.

You had a few grammar mistakes, but those can easily be fixed by reading your story over a few times to yourself.

Overall; you just need more content, and remember: SHOW don't tell.

So sad I fill bad for them. I like your story sad but cute. ''wha'' to cute and sad.

...Ooh, wow... Gaara's was pretty angsty and Hinata's was just the same. Great job!!