Fantastic story!

Wow...truly beautiful =)

Hey i have to say that this is the best one i have read in a long time, so give yourself a pat on the back!!

i just almost cried at how beautiful your words were...their love making...*sniff* please please write more :) this was beautiful :)
Sassy

loved your story, more please!

Steamy and *beautiful* !

Beautiful!
I loved it. Your work is poetry.
Congratulations.

I really enjoyed this story. We all know he's leaving for a few weeks, so I'm glad you wrote something that shows how he feels about leaving. It's hard to ramain in character during love scenes because we've never seen either one of them in a real relationship before, ( we never saw the personal side of her and Hank, and though I do believe he and Lady Heather did sleep together, we didn't see it.)but I felt that this was very in character. Very Good. Also I've watched this scene several times, and they are definitly at work in that final scene.

This was really beautiful. One of the best written fanfics I have read. Great job, please right more.

I really liked this part:

And then it had come, the chance to restore his faith in his life’s work, to find meaning again in something that once defined him.

Work is a big part of Grissom, regardless of his love for Sara. And as much as she loves him, being in love or her love won't magically solve his work issues.

I love how you end it, with Sara so in tune with Grissom's needs. Very nice!

Joan

This is very good-thanks for a nice "what if?" Would that TPTB
would grace us with something like this. Thanks!

Just perfect. I wish we had more writers like you!

Beautiful, if only we could get half a scene like this I could sit happily through the grissom-less episodes :-) Thanks

That was very good. You write very well. Keep up the good work.

Very nice, I liked it a lot.