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| KatherineGrace79 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. I've never read a story like this from Remus's point of view before. It was great. Very enjoyable. Kate |
| Fiia 2008-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery fun to read! Nice joke about going to Hogwarts mute! Write more :) |
| Lils 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I really loved it. I loved the way you've outlined the relationship between the two and how it starts with Harry saying his name (incorrectly) and that's how it ends. It's just kind of shows how things have come... full circle, I guess is the way to describe it. Nice job. |
| Minerva McGonagall Rox 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is cute. And funny. And sad. I'm glad I am able to have decent birthday parties. Anyway, this is very well written. Have a nice day! ~Minerva McGonagall Rox |
| macaday me a nut 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseCoolio's. This was awesome. I really liked reading it. You set out the characters very well. Macaday me a nut (and your one too!) |
| amortentiaaa 2007-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf only Remus had lived 'til 20. *tear* |
| amortentiaaa 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseAww, it's so sweet. I love Remus, one of my top faves. The ending is amazing. I've always wondered why Harry never stops calling Remus by his last name, but I guess it's habit since he used to be his professor. |
| arien043 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseA nice, well-written story. The only fault I can find is that in the Third Year part of your story, Remus has to ask Harry what form his Patronus takes. I thought that during the Quidditch match where Malfoy pretends to be a Dementor, Remus sees Harry's stag Patronus? |
| piwqefjk 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is really sweet - a gorgeous development through the years of Remus' relationship with Harry. Great job xD |
| Rosie 2007-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought your story was great... really!! It made me laugh and weep at the same time, and I'm not a person who usually weeps or laughs. The only thing that annoyed me a bit is that Remus was alive for Harry's 20th birthday. I don't like when people change the story just because they didn't want some things to happen or some characters to die. But then I thought that probably you had written this before DH, and so it wasn't your fault. Thank you anyway, I really enjoyed myself reading it (the beginning was so sweet and the parts between Sirius and Harry so hilarious!). |
| Potterworm 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story. Absolutely amazing! |
| Ryan Brooklyn 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was magnificent. There were a few errors here and there but the content and style completely knocks those off the chart. Don't worry about them, this is fantastic. Only . . . now that Deathly Hallows is out . . . that ending's a bit different. (Sob!) Anywho, this is great. :-D |
| Iorek Byrnison 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAw.. Great fic! |
| crazyroninchic 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseAh! What an AMAZING fic!! That was so cute, so thought out. I was touched by the last few lines. Absolutely adorable. I love the relationship between Lupin and Harry, and you did it justice very nicely! :) Definitely a fave. |
| carrie 2007-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei luv it i luv it i luv it |