I love this story. I love this song. Well done.

this was beautifully written my dear. i'm in the ** monologues at my school this year and for some reason this one shot kind of reminded me of that. i'm not sure why. but this is really good. i like how it's a simple narrative. i like how ellie ends up saving herself and leaves sean in the end. i just think this is very well done. yes ma'am i do. =)

that one was good too!! it depressed me though ...lol

:o( poor emma. that made me hate sean. but i kinda hate emma more lol and its kinda sad that i related to some of the things "emma" said...idk. i won't explain lol

but really good job lol