AGH, you evil tease! :) Seriously, this is promising to be one of the best MoB fics I've read. PLEASE write more soon?

Not bad. I hope you continue this story.

so need to update This is awesome I love Mirage of Blaze

Love it, but when it the next part coming...need more...need more. It is not the man on man thing it is the 400 year old love story that pierces the heart no matter who it between, but you are forgetting on thing he was raped by the Hojo clan on the battle field when he was 17, orded by his older brother Ujimasa head of the clan.

historically incorrect but still cute.

Nobutsuna Naoe was married into the Naoe family and was only lord of this one castle for 4 years before he was killed.

An update would be loved, if it is too not late to ask. :D

Hi again!

A 'beta' is someone who, after the author has finished the chapter (and before it's posted on the site), looks it over for grammar mistakes, passages which could sound better, comes with suggestions etc.

Hope we'll see an update soon.

KaraQ

Not bad. I love naughty Naoe.

You should perhaps consider a beta, though...

karaQ