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Reviews For: Mutual Intrigue

sarasa cat
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseAw. This is so cute. ^_^
ChapinaYuli23
2007-03-17
ch 1,
abuseCute story! :) First time I read PeneloxBasch and I'm surprised to say I liked it!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues
2007-02-07
ch 1,
abuseAw...a nice, breezy, Penelo/Basch story...
Don't you just love that pairing?
Auron's Fan
2006-12-25
ch 1,
abuseHey! Hey hey hey! They weren't OOC! >< And finally...a BaschxPenelo fic. I'm totally not insane! ...At least, I hope not.

^_^ Very nice fic. They were pretty in character (expecially since you don't own the game o_O) so kudos for that. ^_^

Happy Holidays!
Evie Hawks
2006-12-23
ch 1,
abuseI completely would not have known you hadn't played the game yet if you hadn't mentioned it. I think you wrote Penelo and Basch exactly as they are in the game. Really well done. I hope you do some more with this pairing (or at least with Basch since he is my favorite character). :)
Dark Shedevil
2006-12-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is my favorite FFXII pairing, please write some more!
TheDonutMistress
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuseProps for featuring two underappreciated characters. (I'm sure this'll change as this fic section gets bigger, but for now, you're one of few who has given Penelo and/or Basch much attention.)
I can totally see her having a little crush on him--exactly how you wrote, it, actually. Her thoughts about Basch were where this shined. Thought that was the best part.
I believe the feeling could be mutual, just that it would take longer to develop on Basch's end than hers.
Nicely done, overall, and I sniggered over Vaan's little bit in the story.
Can't wait to see what you write once you've beaten the game. :)
Mandamirra10
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was very cute and very well written. I hope that you intend to write more Basch stories, there are so few of them
HelpComputah
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is a cute little story. I enjoyed it greatly. The innocent crush angle is nice.

There's not enough works featuring Basch. I am patiently waiting for an epic, multi-chapter Basch/Ashe fic to appear.
xx-mads-xx
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseOkay, you're gonna write more, right? Cause I liked this. *tries best kiddie voice* Please ma'm, I'd like some more.
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